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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:44 am

Nice ending. Though a little dramatical for you. And I found it strange, that even though he was bleeding instead of breathing he had the strenght to shout.

Sooooo... who/what are we torturing next?
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:47 am

Kyle is a nice guy. He has a nice life. He has a girlfriend and a good job. His life was going swell, but of course, nothing good lasts. He was living fine until...
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:55 am

The cross hanging on his wall burned for no reason at all. Since then he began to feel scared of every little shadow, every noise. He stopped going to his job, he cut out any connections with his girlfriend; in fact he almost punched her in the face when she greeted him. Sometimes he though he saw a wide hole in his shadow's head, in the shape of a giant grin. He locked himself in his bedroom, without trusting any food he had in the fridge. He panicked, took every lamp there was in the hause, placed them around him and turned them on, to make his shadow disapear. he was sitting liek that the whole day. The night came. He was trembling, forcing himself to stay awake. His legs were in pain from being in an uncomfortable position for five hours straight. He heard a small noise, like a whisper or a gentle wind...
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:06 pm

But he knew better than to think it was the wind. It was a whisper, yes, but wasn't cause by the wind hitting the trees. Something... was calling him. He left Insanity quickly crawl into his mind... he could feel it burning into his head. He was being... seduced. He jumped up and turn the light on just to see the end of a ragged cloak exit through the window. "What was that?" he wondered, but more importantly..."What the fuck did it want with me?"
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:25 pm

He heard a shout from the street. He hurried to the widnow, but he felt something catch his leg. Something like a hand. He turned to his shadow and immediately felt the sensation dissapear. Scared more and more he looked thorugh the window, only to find a sewered head looking at him, hanging from a tree near his window. Before he passed out, he felt a hot stream running down his legs and wetting his pants.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:41 pm

"Kyle? Kyle!"
It all sounded sooo distaannnt....
"Kyyle! Jesus, are you seriously that afraid?"
Kyle could distinct sounds now...
"Oh good, you're up. Hey, sorry, it was a joke! I mean, I didn't think you'd wet your pants!"
Kyle looked up and saw Stan (LOLSOUTHPARK) looking down on him.
"STAN YOU MOTHERFUCKER! GET AWAY!"
And with that Kyle jumped up and head back for his home.
"Kyle! Bro! Listen to me, you need to get out more, you're becoming a dif-
"SHUT THE HELL UP!" Bellowed Kyle. "I'm fine, okay?"
And with that, he lock himself in the house.
He knew that it was a joke, he had felt stan's grip on the stairs... but the cloak...the feeling of dread. There was something else.. something like-
BAM BAM BAM!
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Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:49 pm

The fragile, wooden american walls were pierced by the bullets from an unknnown gun. One of them found it's way to Kyle's kee. He shouted in agony and fell from the stairs, hitting his lef hand painfully during the fall. He looked at his knee, but it was unharmed, he didn't feel any pain at all. The walls were whole too. He heard Stan's steps upstairs.
-Dude? You okay?
It was official. Kyle was losing it.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:03 pm

Kyle was breathing rapidly
"DIDN'T YOU HEAR THE GUNSHOTS?! LOOK AT MY KNE- wait a sec, my Knee!"
"Uhh yeah what about it?" asked Stan
"I got shot a second ago...
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:06 pm

-I really think you should go see a doctor or some--
-SHUT THE FUCK UP! GO DIE!
His wish was granted the second after he said it. Stan fell to the ground in a burst of fire. There was a burned out hole in his face in the shape of an upside-down cross.
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Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:10 pm

"W-What is happening to me? WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING?!" Shouted Kyle madly.
"It's okay my child." A voice answered.
Kyle froze. He had asked the question, yes, but never thought there'd be an answer. He turned slowly and saw amidst the room a physical mass of shadows with two holes that acted as eyes and a big hole in the middle in the form of a grin.
"WHO ARE YOU! WHAT DID YOU DO TO STAN!" Yelled Kyle as he toppled backwards and fell on his butt, when he looked back up he had those two shining holes in front of his eyes.
"Isn't that what you wanted for, though? For him to die?"
"It was just- I wa- I mean- I didn't mean it!" Stammered Kyle
"Oh yes you did. I know so."
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:16 pm

-Wh- no, no I- why... - he tried defending himself but he couldn't deny the truth. Stan was annoying him for much too long. He didn't even know why, but he always wanted to kill him. But in such a way... Kyle started trembling like a little girl, barely holding tears.
-Who... WHAT are you, you son of a...
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:21 pm

"Oh you've heard of me, but let's talk about you."

I don't really feel like continuing this story. It may be awesome but I can't tell rite nao.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:23 pm

I'll contine it maybe... tomorrow. But, well, this seems so much like the Noahs from D.Gray-man...
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:24 pm

Never seen it. I heard watching/reading D-Gray Man makes you gay.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:26 pm

You just thought that up.

And nothing's more gay than Naruto with his emo fetish.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:28 pm

No, I actually saw a poster once... it said.

"D-Gray Man
If you're reading/watching it and you're not gay, then you're reading/watching it wrong."
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:30 pm

I think the one who made that poster was reading it wrong. Or else he's suggesting God is gay.

Also, don't you think we should move this conversation to another topic?
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:32 pm

Alright. How was your day?
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Post  Mavander on Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:36 pm

Quite boring, a regular sunday. Only my dad made me do some garden work. It was about 10 C degrees and I really HATE cold. All I'm looking forward to is a 4-days weekend (national holiday).

And When I said another topic, I meant a forum topic. You know, to not spam in this one. But somehow I got a feeling you knew that and yet twisted it for fun.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:27 pm

Can't think of any story.
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Post  zmanwarrior on Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:59 pm

Just as the Shadow-thing was about to continue it's banter, a teenager burst through the door, a keyblade in his left hand, and a Desert Eagle in the other. "You!" Shouted Kyle "It was you who shot me!"

"Yes" said the keyblade weilder. He shot a beam of light out of his keyblade. The shadow-thing shrieked and evaporated. "My name is Jareth" Said the weilder. "I'm sorry I have to do this, but I'm the protagonist of this story."
With that, he pointed the pistol at Kyle's head, and fired.

The universe collapsed into itself. The cosmos was whirling around in a torrent of light and vibration, all of the laws of physics were broken. Time reversed, gravity became antigravity. Everything seemed to explode into a cloud of chaos. Then everything was as it should have been.

Jareth regained consiousness. He looked around. The bodies of a bunch of male animals were sprawled about the courtyard, but his legs were no longer mangled. Weird. Looking up he saw catapults atop the walls. It wasn't raining animals. They were being launched at him. Well whoever was doing it stopped. Jareth thought about slipping his pants back on, but remembered he was a heartless, and had no genitals to hide. (poor Jareth) He contimplated what to do next.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:09 am

Next we don't allow you to continue our stories, because you're a moron. You love little Jareth so much that you have to let im live and continue his little story, huh? Screw you. The best stories are those that end, quickly for the best and preferably with main's character death. I planned to have around three more posts for Kyle, before I killed him or something.


-A-about me? What the fuck are you talking about?! YOU'RE the shadow raising out of the goddamn floor!
-Ah, haven't you noticed my child? - the grinning being created a hand and placed it on Kyle's cheek. To his surprise it was warm like a human hand. - Haven't you noticed I'm your shadow?
Kyle looked at the floor. The thing was telling the thruth, he was raising right from the place where his shadow began. Shouting, he ran away upstairs, jumping above Stan's corpse. He ran to his bethroom and closed the door, leaning on it. Immediately he felt something hug him tghtly from behind.
-You know the saying, my child? Where there is light, there is always a shadow.


No, this has nothing to do with Kingdom Hearts. And Zman? Little Jareth is dead. Accept it.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  zmanwarrior on Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:27 am

What? You say it isn't fair that I killed off your southpark character, and yet you had a shoopie burst from my character's stomach, launched him to venus, had him smoke grass, and killed him with raining animals. And you try to justify this by telling me how you like to end stories? Wow. Just wow. You know what? Go ahead, keep your retarded story. I don't really give a damn about that subject. It would have been a lot better if you hadn't tried to insult me in your post. If someone like Animetal did that, I'd know he was messing around, but you? I thought you of all people would be better than that.

This is a forum game I made it to have fun, which was what I was doing. I don't know about you.
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Re: Continuous story

Post  Mavander on Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:31 am

My "southpark" character will be killed anyway (actually it's Ani's character). And I'm just mad that you try to stick to your character like he's something special. He's dead. Let's keep him dead. Dead is the best thing that can happen to a main character. I mean, look at Potter for example. He lived. Now who isn't pissed off by that? Except his fangirls.
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Post  zmanwarrior on Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:35 am

listen, It wasn't the story that bothered me. If you want him alive a few more posts, go right ahead. I was just surprised at your response. Over at the comic I've seen you keep your head under more shit than I just gave you. Way more. Seeing you get pissed off like that, for a reason like that, lost some of my respect for you.

So I apoligize for having Kyle's brains blown out. Do as you will with him, this topic is yours. Don't expect me to post here anymore.
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